So a few days ago, the amazing @NerdyChique and I decided (well, I decided really, and roped her in against her will) that we would try our hands at Haiku. I’ve been trying whatever possible to get rid of this inability to write *shrugs* … Anyways, we weren’t so sure about the rules, but we knew it’s meant to be a 3 line poem. It turns out that we weren’t getting it right at all, and what we were doing was simply Micro Poetry. But well, good things often come from mistakes. We chose random things to write on and she was very good as usual. With her permission, I decided to share with you.
Light
NerdyChique: Peeking through the hole/ Awakening the semi-comatose/ Proudly eliminating competition.
Panda: Opening my eyes to reality/Banishing the darkness to nonexistence/Giving me a sense of clarity.
Bed sheets
NerdyChique: Constant reminder of what I had/ How you changed my world/ Like fresh sheets from the dryer.
Panda: In the cool of the morning/I make my way beneath/Blindly feeling my way to you
Faith
NerdyChique: Blindly holding on / Seemingly stupid to believe at all/ My oasis exists in this desert.
Panda: Taking flesh from my doubts/Giving my fears a way out/A way away from the pessimism
Children
NerdyChique: Watching her writhe in pain/ joy and tears at once/ my precious twin angels are here.
Panda: Little feet conquer the concrete/Superman pata and five naira sweets/Grazed elbows and OMO adverts.
Ears
NerdyChique: My tour guide in this maze/ I’m blind without you, you see/ I have no eyes, you see.
Panda: Ingesting the sounds of silence/The bliss that could be/Give them a chance to rest
Attraction
NerdyChique: Your eyes are the anchor/ Stopping my ship at your dock/ Leading me to experience you.
Panda: North and south poles pull/The drag of my unwilling soul/I do not want to need you
Friends
NerdyChique: Fingers intertwined, we stand. Together/ I chose you guys, each of you/ My adopted family.
Panda: Closer than those birthed from one womb/Hold my hair while I throw up/Together we can grow up.
So that’s it. Anyone think I have a future in MicroPoetry? Opinions are always welcome.
August 14th, 2011 at 1:34 am
Fine micropoetry all right! As you rightly said, no not Haiku 🙂
(YB) <—- You both 😀
August 14th, 2011 at 5:07 am
Wow awesome, you’l say you do have a good future with micropoetry! And I’d like you to check my poems too. Good luck
August 14th, 2011 at 8:39 am
Nice.
I’ve got to admit, somewhat ashamedly, that I haven’t the slightest idea what haiku is. I’m also not very familiar with micropoetry. I’ll just look at this as an opportunity to learn.
Thanks, panda, thanks ms NerdyChique.
*zooms off to google*
August 14th, 2011 at 10:20 am
Superman pata…..lmao…
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August 14th, 2011 at 10:21 am
Less is more.all 7 elements done properly 🙂
August 14th, 2011 at 11:55 am
lovely!
August 14th, 2011 at 12:19 pm
Dunno wat Haiku is tho! Sounded like some form of martial arts tho. Lol. Nice piece
August 14th, 2011 at 6:11 pm
hehe. I liked it anyway. You too rock. 😀
August 24th, 2011 at 12:04 am
awwwww it’s lovely…. Haiku sounds japanese like some samurai tradition loool
August 24th, 2011 at 11:32 pm
I think I’m in love…the way you guys brought it together…wow…I can see myself coming back to this post in the future…I can’t seem to get enough. Great stuff. But then again, I’m not surprised.
October 29th, 2011 at 9:57 pm
Yeah, not Haiku but great micropoetry.
I just launched a website that encourages people to write micropoetry of any kind. Haiku, gogyohka, tanka, senryu, twaiku, even prose. I think its possible to be extremely creative with a liied amout of characters, so I’m explore this with PS SMS: The Poet Society of Social Media and SMS.
Would love for you to have a look…
http://pssms.com/
🙂